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A little snippet from the first section of prose in the Tal'verse. I have no idea if this is staying the way it is. It's a little rambling on purpose, to highlight how young he is, but also I feel like I'm not really getting where I need to with it. It seems to make sense to me, but I know the whole plot so I don't think that really counts. So it would be really helpful if you tell me what you got out of it so I can make sure it's working...


http://mercury-hall.livejournal.com/8688.html

A ridiculously short piece detailing the sunset from my character, Pyc's eyes. Pyc is the Lord of the Underworld and Aero, the Sun is his lover. When it's time for night, Aero dies and sinks into the Underworld and Pyc gets to see her, but he can't kiss her because when he does she'll be brought back to life and rise again.

Title: Sunset (not very creative, I know)
Genre: Fantasy
Medium: poetic prose
Rating: PG

It's ridiculously short! Read it! It'll take you like ten seconds or less. And comments are always nice if you can spare another five.

http://mercury-hall.livejournal.com/7378.html

The dissonance was unpleasant. 

I hear you on the telephone
You're breathing on the line
I see your face so clearly now
Though you're only in my mind
You're smiling as you tell me that
you love me day by day
And I count the time that is ticking
And I know you're far away.

The rain is falling falling
The thunder rolls and roars
The seconds tick the time away
I know the lightning's far away.

I tell you that I love you and that
I hope I'll be home soon.
The weather it is fright'ning
I cannot see the silver moon
But I know she's out there, and I know
you're out there too
Oh, I'll be with you tomorrow
If I have to jump the moon.

The rain is falling falling
The thunder rolls and roars
The seconds tick the time away
I know the lightning's far away.

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Title: Winter Just Wasn't My Season

Summary: James was dying and Ana would move on. Autumn would turn to winter and winter would turn to spring. James was dying and Ana would move on.

Read Winter Just Wasn't My Season Here

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